When Angels Sing

Listen to his voice low and deep.

Shhhh Nobody make a peep.

Listen as the words flow.

Watch as his heart of gold starts to glow.

He sings his heavenly melody.

Having this voice should me a  feleny.

Because it's full of so much grace.

His memory is something I could never erase.

His song lingers in my head.

Even after I go to bed.

So I dream of my angels song.

But in my heart is where it truely belongs

 

Author's Note

I got the insperation for this poem when I was listening to my bf sing (:

Reviews

[~*~Peace Keeper~*~]

aww thats sweet..me likes it ^^

Good Job

[Ice Girl]

It's so sweet and pretty :)

[eatmills]

Bypassing the already pointed out spelling mistakes - A very nice ode to your friend and nice timing.

[Lillianna Rey]

other than a few minor spelling mistakes this poem was very good. i love where you got the inspiration :) keep up the good work.

[Serenity Faith]

This was simple, yet sweet. I did catch a few grammatical errors though.
"Having this voice should me a feleny."~ Having this voice should be a felony?
"But in my heart is where it truely belongs."~ But in my heart is where it truly belongs?
Other than that, it's very good. ^_^ Keep it up!

[UnderCompulsion]

Wonderful poem.It is full of love and I really liked it.Great work! :D

[WinterIce<3]

I love this poem and i always love the way you express your feelings keep up the great writing i always look forward to reading your poems

[Owlgirl]

Wow! This is great! Lovely poem, great emotion, well written.

[Justin Flume]

This is good.
Don't really know what to say other than it wasn't really my style. But there's nothing wrong with the poem. It's really good. So i'll just be rating your poetry 100/100

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[Rhea752]

awww very sweet. well written!!!