Two Souls

For Rainer Maria Rilke.

I have two souls,

the one brave,the other fearsome.

You may take charge of one.

Over the night town,

across the bridge,

I see the brake lights

of the trucks heading to Austria.

Reviews

[Moflo]

I like the imagery in the second verse, definitely captivating. Interesting write!

[Tina Kline]

This has two perspectives, the inner person than the outer world. I like the feel of this poem, it's hard to describe...it's different and I like it. I like your whole poem. I see its for someone so I'm sure it has special meaning for them.

Thanks for reviewing my work!