Real Life

A poem for real people in real situations.

I got out of my car

and watched you walk away.

Your head slightly turned, 

and your dark hair moved.

as if you knew I was looking at you from behind.

An overcast sky. Not much sun.

Reviews

[Ken Simm.]

One minute in the life of the world goes by. Paint it as it is said Cezanne.

[Circe]

instantly a classic... a moment hung in the air.. makes an eternal artwork.

[Jed Sabffle]

great writing!

[Emily Rae]

So simple but packs a punch, like much of your writing. I adore your straightforward style

[Cascara (aka Sprint Goe..]

real easy to read and understand...

i enjoyed this poem's simplicity!

[Sarah]

it almost makes me want to know more.

[Crystal]

i like it, it does realate to real life great job