The Moon Two Sides

just some words

ash-teethed                 milk-eyed

a hunter`s shadow           baby hill

climbing down               nail new

wet cardboard               lover tested

so fall the dark road       the sleeping sea

Author's Note

Just some notes, hardly a poem

Reviews

[barleygirl]

I'm not good at interpreting abstract poems, but you help this along by giving your poem a title to set me upon a rich path as I try to interpret your chosen words & phrases. I kinda get the "light" and "dark" juxtaposition of your ideas. I definitely admire how you wrote this to be read all the way across each line or as two separate left-and-right groupings of ideas. Happy Easter! (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie