trump

written in the style of the eugen gomringer, a concrete poet

trump, um, um

do no ald, trr

umph ! umph !

trump..rump,rump

Author's Note

a dadaist political statement

Reviews

[Patricia Wedel]

dear Leslie... when the sky is the darkest the Star shines the brightest.
We all can be lost in a world of disbelief. We do find ourself to be
alone in the Universe... especially when we only see the Moon and all its stages
that Almanacs discuss at length as to when to plant in the best stage of the Moon.
Hitch a ride on a Moon beam and enjoy the view. truly, Pat

[E. M. DuBois]

Well, I guess everyone needs to “cope” in their own ways. The problem with political writing is that you may end up alienating part of your (sometimes potential) audience. Luckily, not everyone is going to be petty enough to leave a scathing review and a grand rating of 0. Some of us know how to take a joke. I’m not familiar with Eugen Gomringer’s work, and that kind of thing should be taken into account with your readers as well, and because of that, on the surface is reads in my mind as if this is from a caveman, which seems to say those who like Trump are of that level of intelligence. See what I meant by alienation? I’m not saying not to speak your mind: Hell, I do fairly frequently, and have a journal on here dedicated just to political rants. But do be prepared to turn off readers. This was the first work I saw from you, and while I can take that in stride, it does turn me off to the possibility of looking over your list of writings.

[Pete Langley]

So clever Les!....and worthy of Private Eye ( you may of heard of it in UK) You say so much in this piece mate. P.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

oh he has such respect around the world...

laugh laugh...reminds me of a cartoon from way back .....Harrumph!
i like how you experiment with different forms....and do them so well each time.
j.