Breaking the Weather

here I just play with some lines

rags of cloud top the wind

a dirt of wind turns your face ;

arranged,

a pace of cloud dirts your face

the top of wind rags your pace,

the lines,now,for you

your face a pace of rain

the wind a race of dirt.

Reviews

[Cascara (aka Sprint Goe..]

the whiteness of clouds is unusually but successfully juxtaposed with the blackness of dirt - interesting write

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Interesting the way in which you weave together this strand of repeated words into a complete poetic blanket. It still has your voice all over it Leslie, an unmistakable slow, deliberate sage voice.