The Dark Between the Stars

an aside, or fragment, a bit lost...

stones under the sand

roads around your eyes,

      when the moon stops

the tide fails,a cold bell

drops out of  the ringing sky

      and you hide in shadow  

         

Reviews

[Cascara (aka Sprint Goe..]

darkness and stillness do not imply silence - nice write and great observation

[Valentine]

Have you ever thought to ask yourself, is there anything between the stars, or what would happen in nature if something caused the tides to stop. How do we find the answers? Valentine

[Great Aunt Astri]

Very evocative. Love 'roads around your eyes' and 'the ringing sky'. Very clever.

[Ken Simm.]

I've said it before and I'll say it again..... the way you use words is nothing short of amazing Leslie. This is a fantastically atmospheric write.

[John Alexander McFadyen]

As always Leslie with your words less is more as you take our emotion and make us feel so bereft with a wash of so few words!