Kalthaus

as it is

open door; icewall

           crusted as a rabid eye

           all the change of skin in frost

           a bedouin of snow

consider the end; 

           white room; stiff starch

           the soft slide of slippers

           along linoleum

winter`s partner; a slower cold   

Reviews

[Ken Simm.]

Excellent. I love the way you take thoughts and turn them around using such wonderful words in to the brushstrokes of Art.
Love the description of a snow drift.

[Cascara (aka Sprint Goe..]

i like how wintery atmospheres are not limited to objects of nature, and are extended to the insides of manmade houses

[Tina Kline]

This is a ry chilling poem. It is very cold. As winter is cold and the end of our lives is cold. This is a fantastic write.

[Coyote Song]

This is very cold and stark. I sensed a menace here. something colder and darker, perhaps a waiting death or something just as bad. Impressive poem.

[Valentine]

We are really getting that slower cold today. Snow falling hard along with the temperature. The ice wall line made me think of the news yesterday when a woman opened her door and there was snow clear to the top of the door jam. Then of course is the catching a cold and sneezes. Valentine