Film School

just a thought

Suddenly, lights from a car outside.

Ghosts on a wooden floor,

created by a window and snow.

This is the way you leave the world.

Reviews

[Valentine]

Having looked at my husbands face as death was nearing...I wondered what he saw and thought. Kathie

[Coyote Song]

This is very sinister in nature. All the imagery give me a cold feeling of something dark hovering. It may just be death but that's enough. Fantastic write.

[Cascara (aka Sprint Goe..]

"Ghosts on a wooden floor,
created by a window and snow."

Striking and unique imagery here. Lovely poem indeed.

[A. Amos]

Minute read but as a reader felt so much was going on... Seeking for more...brilliant work!

[Einstein Noodle]

i like the title! read your poem several times .. lots between the lines for me ... i ride a motorcycle and at the outset realized the difference between "being" in the moment and viewing it from inside a car .. sobering ..almost chilling indeed ..life can and does "turn on a dime" .... such a lot in four lines .. enjoyed the reading!
E.

[Tina Kline]

Very dark with a cold touch of chill. Brilliant work in my opinion.

[Ruth]

Wow...left me with goosebumps! Brilliant!

[AYVID N]

That's a very unique way of putting it. When re-read it, everyw word has so much meaning. The end always comes unexpected and i am sure it will be a novel and powerful experience. Thank you for such a thoughtful subject.

[Lyn Anderson]

This takes a person in many directions with few lines. I do so enjoy your work.

[V]

Calm with a nice choice of words. A poem one wants to reread. The last line is splendid.