Night

I write a lot, but I`m not happy with my work.

Should be more words to describe it;

               black as tar on a pebble beach,

Under a fishing boat that smells

               of seaweed and saltwood,

Or something spoiled by lights epileptic,

               shadow of shadows

               that drip like failing day.

A half, cool with slate and silence

               less to see, more to feel.

  

Reviews

[Coyote Song]

Very descriptive. This gives me a feeling of dark or night.
I like it.

[Tina Kline]

I like this. All have a feeling and quality of darkness or the color black.
I don't always like my work either, so I do understand.