Girl At A Bus Stop

Girl At A Bus Stop

A Poem by Leslie Philibert
"

a poem I wrote quickly, that needs some work

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A white dress
full of winter cherries;
hair curled with frost.

A carried box
tied with string
and legends.

Maybe a modelled
sister,or a ghost
from a playground.

You turn to
circumnavigate
in all this road

and wonder that
this is as
a finger of snow in April.

The sky is hasty
with a flock of clouds,
broody, hanging -

The next day empty ;
just a shape without standing ;
colder. 

© 2015 Leslie Philibert


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I like the analogy of nature you used here. "a ghost from a playground" caught my attention first. That's a rather good catch phrase. "The next day empty". Implied rather well. Enjoyed reading this.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Leslie Philibert

9 Years Ago

Hallo Shivam, thanks for the kind words.
Shivam Murari

9 Years Ago

Anytime. I have come here after months. Its nice to see you're still around. :)

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Leslie Philibert
Leslie Philibert

Bavaria, Germany



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