Genesis in March

dedicated to all those who take time to read my poetry, my thanks..

The first six days;

a cold stage

waiting for snowdrop

orphans;then the rest,

the sky of constant sorrow

breaking thanks to brittle

light.The white bones

devoid of recall, the crust

of cold loam hanging

alone.Travel this way

again,missing on a thrown road.

It waits.

Reviews

[外人 (Gaiji..]

Very beautiful and evocative, I really enjoyed the choice of leaving the final word to the following stanza, it gives an interesting flow to the rhythm. The final verse really caught my attention: short, straight-forward, quite interestingly it revolves around a verb of stasis, to wait, while the last verb was quite the opposite, a verb of movement, to travel. Great job.

[Tina Kline]

Very compelling poem with strong imagery in it. I think its fantastic!

[Coyote Song]

A grand poem with splendid descriptions and imagery. I enjoyed this one a lot.

[Valentine]

Snow here too but the sun is shining today and it is 40 degrees. Come on spring. Valentine

[Helen Crutchett]

Fantastic poem Leslie. But I always knew you were an amazing and accomplised poet. So great to be reading you again.

Cheers,

Helena :)

[Leslie Philibert]

Thanks for your kind words, I`m not sure I deserve such praise, I still have a lot of work to do !