After a Line by Geoffry Chaucer

I`m not sure if this is any good, what do you think ?

Your yen two wol slee me sodenly

Surrounded by warm sand

Black pools deep as the

Cold in your face

Your hand

With emollient grace

Will cut the wire

Carved then polished

Hair that twists as

In a Spring flood

Your two eyes will slay me suddenly

Reviews

[Tina Kline]

I like this a lot. It does have an emotional impact.

[Ruth]

Good? You're kidding, right? Beyond good! lol Damn epic, left a shiver xo

[Jack Cassidy]

Oh, it's good... I feel like this should be transcribed on a tree....