Ten Forms Of Green

looking out the window

through glass;half shadows

a vomity parade of green,

the anarchy of growth

thick as chlorophyll,

strange as grass

all outside

here near your voice

flat and pale

as a windless calm,pacific

let me go, to

greenstain my toes

free under the yellow ball

out too.

Reviews

[Briana O'Connor]

Love the freshness you describe. The concept of looking out the window and taking it all in is a beautiful concept, in deed. The imagery is a breath of fresh air and a wind of contentment. Thank you for sharing.

[A. Amos]

I truly enjoyed the voice of you as a writer, elegantly penned.

[Leslie Philibert]

Thanks for looking at this, best wishes.

[A. Amos]

You're most welcome my friend...

[jacob erin-cilberto]

damn the imagery in this is so unique..."a vomity parade of green"
"greenstain my toes/free under the yellow ball/ out too"

i can't do this...you have a knack...that calm voice...that abstract feeling...it's love.

nicely done.

[Leslie Philibert]

Hallo Jacob, thanks for the kind words, and a review from an excellent poet like youself is worthread moreHallo Jacob, thanks for the kind words, and a review from an excellent poet like youself is worth
a lot to me, best wishes, Les.