The Italian Way To Say Goodbye

just for fun poem

she swings her hips

and waves with

the back of her hand

and doesn`t look back

but gets lost in

the crowd...ciao.

Reviews

[Rosalind Gale]

Like Liza Minnelli at the end of Cabaret... thanks Leslie, ciao!
-x-

[stars are far]

That is very well done, girls are strong in goodbyes, but weak after they turn their faces.
well done my dear friend

[Tate Morgan]

My kinda girl lol Gotta love em

[Coyote Song]

It is a fun poem. I like the image of her walking off, getting lost in the crowd of ever moving people.

[Frieda P]

Ha spot on, favoloso...ciao ciao.

[Leslie Philibert]

Danke,Grazie,Merci,thanks...

[jacob erin-cilberto]

as if she had just been a mirage...this gives me a picture of her walking away, the screen undulating with her swing her smile her wave and then....she disappears...but not from memory.

[Leslie Philibert]

not a deep poem, just for fun !

[jacob erin-cilberto]

but with more lying under the surface...
i find sometimes i write poems in a light hearted fashion...seemingly just for a smile...and then realize later, there was more behind the pen than i thought...something in the subconscious.

but you achieve something either way here...just a smile, or a little more than that.

[Ken Simm.]

What is the word I'm looking for? Er, I think perhaps Gnnnnnnnngbingwe'llkeepawelcomeinthehillsideflutterbuck about covers it. Going to lie down now.

[Leslie Philibert]

Likethereviewandbestwishes.....