Two Rooms

about duality

Two rooms at night

One light, one dark

But both full of stars

And full of voices

Empty as the moon

A stone in cold water

A frozen bell

An hour full of brass

A grave filled with glass.

Reviews

[Coyote Song]

An amazing poem. Love the imagery. I think you accomplished your goal. Love it!~

[Lyn Anderson]

You have this twisted genius with the last line. Love it.

[stars are far]

That was very great, the imagination there was well employed..
well written

[Sami Khalil]

In your definition of duality I see your humanity and in your glass grave I touched a soul so brave not to share the truth in the hour full of recognition and mission. Excellent...:)...........

[Leslie Philibert]

Glad you like it, thanks for the review.

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:)....................

[Shaquana Adams]

One light, one dark.

A most interesting concept. I really like this, but one thing...what does a grave filled with glass mean?
-QuanaWana

[Leslie Philibert]

I don`t know what it means. Poetry doesn`t always have to mean anything in a literal sense, it isread moreI don`t know what it means. Poetry doesn`t always have to mean anything in a literal sense, it is
often just a picture. A grave filled with glass is a grave filled with glass !

[Rosalind Gale]

All moons collide from all the planets; duality in love - an impressively quiet piece, atmospheric language throughout. Thank you.
-x-

[Leslie Philibert]

Thanks for the kind words, best wishes.