Southeast Nineteen

I don`t worry too much about getting reviews..for me the creative process is more important than what happens after..

And this is what I need

When a statue drops

And flings porcelain

Between my shoes.

Then comfort draws me

Back home

Down the street

Where I was made.

This is my special tragedy

The way the stars don`t move

In the night externa

They are over my house

Because they are.

Reviews

[外人 (Gaiji..]

That's interesting, very expressive, it leaves a certain feeling I can't describe :)
Well done !

[Tina Kline]

A wonderful write, things are just because they are.
Another very impressive unique write.

[Lyn Anderson]

An insightful piece, with your own unique twist. A wonderful spot of imagery and metaphor.

[Ruth]

Things are what they are, at times, acceptance...a brilliant piece of metaphor, truly magnificent! x

[AYVID N]

I agree with you about the creative process being so much more satisfying.

This is my special tragedy
The way the stars don`t move
In the night externa
They are over my house
because they are."

Stars don't move...It's destiny and my lot...A very deep and thoughtful write.

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