Wrong

something is wrong

There are too many moons,

bells are under the church.

The night is not as dark as a wet ditch

and the morning stops as soon

as it starts; as you leave the coal

in the oven still glows, the door

closed twice to make it properly shut.

Please take this day; wrap it in string.

Reviews

[Ken Simm.]

I am surprised of the lack of reviews here. This is a moment in time with all the visual. aural and subtle clues of that moment. Cezanne's one second of the world. And I admire the hell out of it for that.

[Leslie Philibert]

Hallo Ken, thanks for the review. I don`t worry too much about the lack of reviews, I use WritersCafe to try out my work and archive it. I send a lot of work to magazines too. It is fact a problem that because of the serial rights most magazines, real and virtual, want original material.Glad you like this,
maybe rather simple, but I like to try and write with a bare style, with just a few good images.
Thanks once again, and best wishes from a nice sunny day here in Bayern...