Sketch

just a few thoughts

The moon does what moons tend to do

and graces the windfall night.

Earthground sings as a virgin

                      high meadows will not be flooded

                      the amber of trees not frozen.

Barley resting,the sun unseen and cold

                      a summer lake dark tin

                      night birds constant.

 

Autumn leaves are not ready to rain.

We must travel again, but for now

all is as it should be.

Reviews

[Arabdha]

a delight to read..

[David Scott]

How lovely do the words fall to page? One of my favorites here.
So many poems are inspired by the celestial orbs traveling the universe with us. It is nice to pause and thank them for the company...
Simply wonderful. I have nothing but praise.

[Sami Khalil]

A splendid read and write...:)

[The dark story]

this is quite beautifully penned. i loved this line a lot:
"Autumn leaves are not ready to rain."...the diction are so nice and it flows elegantly. thanks for sharing!

[Stefon Napier]

I'm going to remember you and your work for a long time to come. The things you write don't even appear to be written, it seems like the ground itself has risen up to speak. You are indeed Legendary.

[FJ Davis]

Poetry, pure and lovely.
Wonderful, Leslie!

[Coyote Song]

I like, very graceful and elegant. Outstanding imagery. This has a real peaceful feel to it.

[SyberRose]

I enjoyed your thoughts Leslie from beginning to end...It is nice to feel content... and like the title sketch too...Perfect...Rose

[Ufi Auttorri ~ Amy C. T..]

Very nice, Leslie! These lines sing:

Autumn leaves are not ready to rain.
We must travel again

Reads as a composure for an evening's rest. Well done. :)

100/100 & fav'd