Morning ( for W)

a poem with a kind of mantra...

your breath in the night

                    as outside the rain

                    be kind slow

your eyes bohemian glass

                   but other in dawn

                   be kind slow

your drift over varnished floors

                  a nightgown full flowered

                  the singing of cups

                  be kind slow 

Reviews

[Helen Warner]

This is one of the most beautiful poems I have read in a very long time. Your word choices are brilliant in all of your work. This is the kind of writing that I can read over and over as it challenges me to want to learn and grow creatively.

[Coyote Song]

A fantastic poem. Beautiful imagery used. The format used adds to its uniqueness.

[Celtic]

It's a lovely piece, liked your flow. you know wht here your IInd stanza's stron' to read for a reader. It's good. your tittle's different indeed.
well written, i'd like to read more about it if you'll continue it furthur.
nice one.

[Ken Simm.]

Matisse could draw a portrait in five lines. You have done one in ten.

[Holly Mason]

be kind slow- slowness is kindness go to fast and you are just settling without truly knowing
I feel like you know this person you write about or you have a very certain mind picture
love the words you have shared-bohemian glass,nightgown full flowered,signing cups-just lovely thoughts
thank you for sharing fine sir

[Ency Bearis]

Great work nice poem to read, - I like the format.

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

Reads sooo smoothly and the end line repetition adds a hynotic feel...

amazing :)

[Tina Kline]

Very beautiful, poetic, and dreamy in a good way, Fantastic poem and very enjoyable!