Maths in the Park ( for Marzena)

I hpe this all adds up....

Park divided by ducks is standard

Dogs plus leads is dictatorship

Sun minus light is evening

Eyes multiplied by hair is laughter

Love minus pity is selfless

Affection multiplied by love is adoration

Hate minus passion is military

Devotion divided by thought is religion

The world divided by humanity is paradise.

Reviews

[AYVID N]

brilliant!

[jacob erin-cilberto]

it all adds up to me. this is my type of poem, you carry the metaphor all the way through in a very smart way...

i especially love the line. "Eyes multiplied by hair is laughter"

that is priceless...

love this poem...

"hate minus passion is military" so true...regimented hate, no feeling, just killing because we have to...a soldier's creed.

jacob

[Circe]

like watching a sage do maths.... very original, true and powerful ideas.. I wonder what it would look like if you added calculus in there! that last line is stunning, finishing with a serious punchline.

[Shandra Sun]

Dear Leslie, I'm not goed at Math at all...but your math hier made my day.
How creative and still very acurate (like math) ...
You must be a profound thinker to come with those thoughts.
Love it.

[FJ Davis]

Clever, amusing and, in some cases, profound!

[Marie]

This is excellent. You've added axioms to the sum of truth.