Circle

an attempt to write a serious poem..

A rain hawk circles in the dawn.

The dawn uncovers the trees ;

the trees lead to a forest.

The forest sinks into the damp earth ;

the damp earth waters the stones.

Stones are under a rain hawk -

a rain hawk circles in the dawn

a rain hawk circles in the dawn.

Reviews

[Dayran]

A beautiful way to wake up in the morning and make contact with our conscious experience, before we begin our daily activity. Thks Les. You redefine what is serious.

[FJ Davis]

Dramatically depicts a perceived interconnection--one natural circle.
I very much like the sound and feel of this short poetic account.
An impressive offering, Leslie!

[Leslie Philibert]

Thanks !

[Circe]

this piece has the power to saturate and sink into skin, bones.. the root of being.. it illustrates a birds eye view and zooms in close to find connections in nature, earth, there remains forces from the sky (dawn & hawk) and the ground... (trees and stones)...

[Leslie Philibert]

Thanks for the kind words !