Without You

for W.

Without you...

the sun would join the Union of Astral Bodies and go on strike

Batman and Robin would have a big argument

the stars would become unglued and fall down

the Lunchpack of Notre Dame would drop Esmeralda ( oops..)

my socks would walk about on their own

John Wayne would lose his hat at the start of the film

Christmas would be abolished and my sons would return

to never-never land and...

I would never write another poem.

So I think it´s better to be nice to you.

Author's Note

I like writing serious poetry, but I have the feeling that for the internet this is the right kind of material, so I hope it will be liked

Reviews

[外人 (Gaiji..]

Interesting, the last couplet was AMAZING !! Curious all the associations with famous real or fiction people, just about the author's note: Who cares about what's most suitable to internet, poetry was made from you for you and must be loyal to you only ! If us, the internet, don't get it, it's our problem, every poem as long as it's authentic, it's beautiful ! Write what you feel you want to write, not what you think we want to read ;)

[quinfinn]

cute, clever, cunning and very entertaining.....love it!

[Susie Q]

Love the humor in this one and the discriptions how you would feel if you lost your love, some I would never have given a thought. Keep writing!

[AYVID N]

so true :) Loved it! Said in humor but still very meaningful.

[Circe]

you always write with purpose and for something worth reading... this shows your sense of humour and contains a light, happy fondness in the tone...having fun with popular culture icons. I like your serious poems and your lighthearted ones both.

[Eric Cox]

A fun read with a meaningful theme behind it. I like your pen upon this. Nicely done!

[Tina Kline]

A delightful poem! Some people can and do mean the world to us. I enjoyed your poem greatly.

[Heather]

beautiful words

[Tomi]

=D a very fun piece! well enjoyed

[Cascara (aka Sprint Goe..]

i enjoyed how silliness, sarcasm, and romance worked out so well here! :P