A Better World

pop poetry

China will be declared part of the Peoples Republic of Tibet ; Somalia will send

food parcels to the Swiss and the Mexicans will build a fence to prevent illegal

immigration from the United States.There will be a Queen in Saudia Arabia and

P***y Riot will be elected to the Duma. The Taliban will build a church in Kabul

and invite the Pope and his wife to open it. Fast food will slow down ; the Israelis

will paint their nuclear weapons gay pink and ship them to Iran , North Korea will

be renamed Happyville.A clown will be named President of the World Bank and

North Africa wll accept refugees from Europe.

Facebook will discover that friends are real people,my sons might understand that

my car needs petrol and my wife will stop buying shoes.

And if you thought that poetry can`t change anything, you are right.

But it`s worth a try, isn`t it ?

Author's Note

an old poem that I hope will be looked at again...

Reviews

[Woody]

thought provoking and VERY funny. I enjoyed the read quite a lot.

[Stephen]

Umm ... Sounds very interesting! I`m surprised to see how a writer can go in so deep with words ---- transferring his feelings into the poem! Great ~~ I loved this .. you`ve really got some talent of writing. I`m going to look forward to reading your stuffs!

[Aunre]

Absolutely... except for the shoes bit. That's just crazy.

[Inder24]

nicely written :D good humour (Y)

[Lyn Anderson]

I really liked this one. You are quite the thoughtful and clever writer.

[Rossen]

loved absolutely everything about this rosey pink colored glass of heaven !!


100/100

[A. Amos]

I can't stop smiling, loved the gay pink nuke for iran....marvelous pure wit and sharp write, with twist of humor:!

[Kristina Moulaison]

This is great! The juxtapositions or untruths were oddly thrilling. Loved the sons realizing the car needs petrol, having four grown children myself. :) Words can change the world and why not start with a simple wish. Even trying to see these things is a start. I really like it.

[Tomi]

haha! "my wife will stop buying shoes" killed me. Hilarious.

[Devesh]

This had me laughing my arse off! Thanks for the entertaining read. :D