~ Only in Dreams ~

~ Only in Dreams ~

A Poem by Misery

Only in dreams...do these empty arms wrap themselves around so supple a frame.

 

Only in dreams...are tenderly inhaled the heather of hair, the perfume of skin.

 

Only in dreams...is the passion-drenched taste of an unknown kiss eagerly unveiled.

 

Only in dreams...Milady.


--Misery

© 2016 Misery


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I really enjoyed this, until the last word. This is only my opinion, but if you drop "Milady" I think it would actually add to the poem. That's just my preference. 100/100 regardless. Thanks for sharing.

Posted 7 Years Ago


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Misery

7 Years Ago

Thank you, dear poet. Your gracious review is deeply appreciated. Would follow your sound advice i.. read more

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Just a Lost Poet (no patrons; no diplomas; no institutions; no grants), stranded upon a heap of one thousand dog-eared poems - words born of miseries witnessed in many lives and landscapes. Regardi.. more..

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A Poem by Misery