Compartment 114
Compartment 114
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Her

Her

A Story by Leo Allen
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I could go into infinite detail concerning her qualities I have become so enraptured with, but I’d find myself at a loss for words. The language I speak has a particularly finite capacity by which I could never illustrate my true infatuation. The love I have come to know is quite possibly the topmost of complexities I have come to perceive in this world. The mere attempt at providing a definition for such a feeling is exhausting to say the least. I have become innocently and humbly obsessed. Was it the first time she called my name? Or was it the first time she gave me the sensation of security and highness when at my lowest? No matter the unmeasurable amount times I find myself turning these thoughts over in my head, I find but one conclusion. She will always be life’s greatest question, and my greatest answer.

© 2015 Leo Allen


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I love the idea of this - how it totally encaptures a feeling greater than the word "love" that I haven't been able to describe myself. Very thoughtful. I especially like the last line - that in itself could be an entire story. It is absolutely beautiful.

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I love the idea of this - how it totally encaptures a feeling greater than the word "love" that I haven't been able to describe myself. Very thoughtful. I especially like the last line - that in itself could be an entire story. It is absolutely beautiful.

Posted 8 Years Ago


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Added on November 26, 2015
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Tags: romance, love, short, paragraph, mystery

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Leo Allen
Leo Allen

Boise, ID



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Just a guy with a passion for writing stories short enough to keep my own attention. English with a linguistics emphasis BA at BSU. more..

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