I Must Believe There is More

Rain falling; washing away the tracks of pain,

Steps I cannot feel as the cold winds invade,

Time has passed or has it stopped?

I care not; time no longer matters.

 

I want to see you one more time,

I want to feel your arms about me,

Feel the kiss you gently place upon my head,

Oh God, I just want to feel again.

 

Did I pass this block before or am I somewhere new?

A car honks as I step down off the curb,

I stop and stare but cannot see,

Tears blind me through the downpour.

 

How can death seem so final?

I want so badly to believe that you walk beside me.

It must be you blowing my hair gently,

Letting me know that you share my pain.

 

I can’t go on if there is nothing more.

I can’t wake each day and know I’ll never see you.

I must believe that there is another plain.

Where we will walk in sunshine, once again.

 

 

 

 

 

Reviews

[RSalassi]

Touchingly gentle thoughts for a love now gone, but always remembered. Beautiful write.

[KAREN]

This is sad, felt the pain and emotion of this poem. It was well written with so much heartwarming feelings.

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

So sad when a love one passes on, you wish you could feel their closeness and be with them again. In times like that sweet precious memories we keep! Great write!

[Thea Fuentebella]

a sad and heartwarming piece. powerful, too.
great write...:)

[J.S. Pua]

nice..
this is touching..
and well written..

[Middling]

very spiritual and thought provoking...

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Death is never final... keep the memories alive in your heart and that person will always be walking with you... I have dealt with this a couple times.

[An owl on the moon]

There is such an overwhelming sadness.. the loss of one so dear. Your writing touches deeply the heart and mind.. and gives us a longing glimpse of that place where we can walk once more in the sun...

[Coyote Poetry]

The poem is very sad. I could feel the emotion and wish for the good times. I understand the emotion in the poem. We are always left with wishing for more time and words to be said. A excellent poem.
Coyote

[Alicante lullaby]

sorry for your loss.pain and more pain.