My Brother, My Friend

Just an FYI, prayers answered.

 

I followed you around when we were young
I worshiped you; your praises I sung
You were so much older and wiser and right
You were my north star in my blackest night

I broke your clowns when I was three
I cried on your shoulder when I skinned my knee
You were always there when I needed a friend
You were the unwavering force that would not bend

We sang in the kitchen, you and me
Classic oldies, and ballads and Fiddle de Dee
Summer time in soprano and bass
Our own special concert in a warm homey place

I grew to my teens and you threatened the boys
Not letting them treat me like one of their toys
Then off to war you went and I cried and I prayed
That God would return you to us as we waited afraid.

Home you came; we wed the loves of our life’s
Through happiness, birth and the day to day strife’s
We shared every one; burdens and bliss
Even the death of our parents, we made it through this

You moved across country but we still stayed in touch
Birthdays, holidays, grandchildren and such
But you called me tonight to give me the news
That my best friend and my brother was singing the blues

The prognosis wasn’t good; I cannot accept
I cussed, and I paced and then I just wept
Now I'm praying again that He'll answer my plea
To help you, to cure you, to keep you with me.

Reviews

[Anita B Jacques]

Oh Lena, I was with you through every stanza, a beautiful and heartfelt poem, a great write my friend,
thank you for sharing with me. I lost my favorite brother 3 months ago, I wrote the poem"Grief", the day I was told about it (from France) I couldn't say good bye. I lost 4 of my siblings. God bless you
Hug....Annie

[Brianna Brie]

What a beautiful tribute. The rhyme and rhythm is flawless...smooth as butter. Love it!

[HoorayForUnderdog]

I just love how your poems read with such fluidity...another excellent work!

[Reika]

The flow of this poem and the flow of emotions in it were so touching.
This was simply, beautiful.