Blue

This poem and many of the others are in my free book 'Chaos Verses'

Blue deep, cobalt, aquamarine.

I went inside the steep wave, ocean blue gleam.

Sapphire keen, sharp; opened out cliffs.

Icy water, choppy, jewelled- blue lips.

Sailed home, wave gone, blue pills, drug.

Came home to pale door, sky blue rug.

Royal, ultramarine, the short light beam,

Navy fringed, powder blue, our dreams.

Into pool, deep, full, I dived.

Veins thin, blood within half alive.

Arteries needed too, so it lives.

Marine blue, all to you I give.

 

Reviews

[Dave W.]

I like how the first half makes me think of the freedom of the ocean, then coming back down to earth, water is till present but instead of an ocean it's a pool, confined. I really liked this.

[Lena Chere]

Thank you. It was supposed to be about colours and a pirate character! It's great how poems mean differnt things to differnt readers.