Pain

To say love lasts forever is a lie, he says.

Turning away from him, she spills her salty drops, hitting the pavement.

Sounds like gunshots, war-zone weaponry, hit pavement.

Slow motion, dramatized.

Pain.

Pain.

Corkscrewing my insides. 

Pain because my love, when I give it, will always last.

Reviews

[Deactivated_BurningDemo..]

Well written and easily related to. :D
I love it.

[Steve]

Wow. I like your style! Very well done.

[vido.]

riveting and sincere. easily related to, i know that feeling. dont give up on love dear!