DIM PASSED

DIM PASSED


Up are the thick grey clouds
That veiled the shone of sun,
bring forth day or night doubt.

Rays of hope in you, gone.
Bloom been displaced by gloom,
run a red light against fun.

Glory drowned in gory;
Story by thy fury,
told and sung when lonely.

The sloppy cloud shall pour.
From the fumes of your hope,
Victory shall soon be forge.

Run along the grey clouds
for mouthful kiss of bliss,
And liss ye with still sound.

In your heart; ye find peace
when the grey clouds has sparsed
And the sun shine with ease.
Happy as lark shall you be when the dim has passed.

LekANTIC©™°¹⁴

Author's Note

jettison doubts, rejuvenate your hope, your Life shall be a success!

Reviews

[LekANTIC]

thank you.....they say when there's Life, there's hope, so when we keep hope alive, we keep our chances of survival and success at peak

[Jimmy Yetts]

The clouds only temporarily block the sun; they do not extinguish it.
Let the ole Earth take a couple of whirls, and our nearest star will shine, again.
"Dim Passed" is a lyrical and hopeful message, L.
Very fine work!