Letting go

Letting go

A Poem by Ina Waltz

I grew up and noticed that I was

like those apples on a tree

grasping so closely to the branches
in the middle of winter,

afraid to let go and be on their own.

Also, I noticed how those apples
slowly rotted away with the snow

becoming wrinkly, ugly and old

until no one wanted them anymore.


Before it's too late for me to fall,

I decided to let go. 

© 2013 Ina Waltz


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great work beautiful

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

wow that was amazing love the last two lines..perfectly written :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

And that's where all the brief, glorious living takes place...

I like this soulful little poem :-)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

a leap of faith.....

Posted 11 Years Ago


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Added on February 5, 2013
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Tags: mature, nature, falling, growing up, growing old, metaphor, apples

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Ina Waltz
Ina Waltz

Zagreb, -- Please Select --, Croatia



About
I write poetry and short stories. I also draw and paint abstract images that my mind creates in order to understand the world and myself. I cannot live without creative outlet; when I don't write/pain.. more..

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