The unsayable

Sloppy movement of my bones

on your oh-so-fragile skin

conducting wires through my fingers

like you've never done it before

challenging organs to obey your will

kissing a shivering freckle over my lip

creeping in as I curl up my limbs

like we've never done it before

Reviews

[Steven]

I so dig your style. Even in softness, there is that hint of brutality. And I think of small Eastern Europe kitchens with strong women and steaming copper kettles and peeled potatoes. That's just in general. Specifically, this piece should be a song. It's lovely and flames fortissimo the pianissimo in love. Delightful. Really.

[That_Girl]

Oooh I'm envious- this is wonderful! Every single word fits the poem perfectly. I can't pick a favorite part, the entire thing was... well, perfect. Love it.

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

exciting........beautiful and innocently sensual.

[Ina Waltz]

Thank you for your kind review. I'm glad you enjoyed it!