Silver and gold

Silver and gold

A Poem by Ina Waltz
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I feel like this would be a nice nursery rhyme :')

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They washed her face with silver and gold

and she always did what she was told

One day her head spun and made a switch

she ran away and became a witch

© 2012 Ina Waltz


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Marvelous! I love it when people write these short, little virgin-esque topical allusions; they have the potential to be so autobiographical, at the subliminal level of course. Madonna gone bad - to rebellion and hellion. It is similar to Mayflies I've seen, with purpose and a zest for life - after all they only have one day to live. In summary: "All beautiful flowers must wither and die. Even the witches.", he said with a sigh.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ina Waltz

12 Years Ago

I completely agree on the matter of autobiographical potential; somehow it is.
I was always a.. read more
Tam Warink

12 Years Ago

There are many paths, many destinations, many minds that offer themselves up as traveling companions.. read more



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Interesting. but i dont get the message.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Ina Waltz

12 Years Ago

Read the review by Tam Warink and my response to it, you'll understand then. :) Thank you for your r.. read more
Marvelous! I love it when people write these short, little virgin-esque topical allusions; they have the potential to be so autobiographical, at the subliminal level of course. Madonna gone bad - to rebellion and hellion. It is similar to Mayflies I've seen, with purpose and a zest for life - after all they only have one day to live. In summary: "All beautiful flowers must wither and die. Even the witches.", he said with a sigh.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ina Waltz

12 Years Ago

I completely agree on the matter of autobiographical potential; somehow it is.
I was always a.. read more
Tam Warink

12 Years Ago

There are many paths, many destinations, many minds that offer themselves up as traveling companions.. read more
Simple and funny.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ina Waltz

12 Years Ago

Thank you, Sami, for your lovely review!
Sami Khalil

12 Years Ago

You are welcome. My pleasure.

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Ina Waltz
Ina Waltz

Zagreb, -- Please Select --, Croatia



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I write poetry and short stories. I also draw and paint abstract images that my mind creates in order to understand the world and myself. I cannot live without creative outlet; when I don't write/pain.. more..

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