Snowflake

 

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A simple star you are not

A floating hexagon of white

Drifting silently on the ice breeze

Your intricate pattern stays unseen

Nature's finest work dissolved

On my heated windscreen

 

 

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One design within another

Neatly divided into segments of six

Water at its most imaginative

Each of you is somehow unique

You come in as an army

Crystallising the world

 

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Reviews

[YouoweYoupay]

You are watching snowflakes fall and you tell us what you see. What beautiful eyes you've got. : )

-youoweyoupay

[Lily Mae]

An absolute beauty. In words and in style. I love this..xo

[Coyote Poetry]

I like your description of the snowflakes. Thank you for the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Claire Twinn]

Like the snowflakes, this is unique and beautiful. Well done.

[Blue Ivory]

I simply love this! The presentation, your words, everything about this is perfect! It lifted my mood :D Good job

[Mockingbird]

snowflakes are fleetingly beautiful wonders of this world. thoughtful and vivid ode to the snowflake. excellent job.

[Michael G.]

Lovely.
Well done.

[Adam Whitworth]

well done

[Phillitup]

Oh my! This is amazing and what I clicked on, thinking about snowflakes, I got something totally different and far more beautiful. I compliment you on your gracefulness as you write about the delicate things in life. Maybe next time I will read the authors name to imagine what they might write just a little better. You did a wonderful job. You have talent, keep going!

[ms. barrie]

beautiful in it's simplistic, poetically enriched unique imagery you used here. brilliantly penned! thanks for your review of "Stars" -- write on :)