Corn Field

 

I am in love with the girl with the golden hair

She runs like a child in the fields

Her hair flows so free

Like a sea of corn behind her

 

Once she said “Come now and chase me”

And we ran through the path she wove

And very soon I held her near

In the middle of a sudden cloudburst

 

She flushed deepest rose as we pressed together

Hiding from the sudden torrent

But did it rain just then? I couldn’t tell

I was blocked by the landscape of her

Reviews

[Art Lover/Love Writing]

it's so simple and sweet
and I love how you put " the landscape of her"
Im usually not a romance person but I loved this

[spiritwind]

My goodness, leighgreen, this is a beautiful little jewel.
" But did it rain just then? I couldn’t tell
I was blocked by the landscape of her"
That is an awesome line that you give us somewhat casually, somewhat offhand... that's what poets do bwhen they know they have the goods! Well done!

[Jetta Zippora]

Oooo. :o This is a brilliant and beautifully mysterious write, friend. Well done. :)

[John Alexander McFadyen]

A really lovely, soft and whimsical piece flecked with the stain of mystery and perhaps even fantasy.

[Dayran]

Our literature is filled with references to women as both the personal aspect of friend and as the impersonal aspect of the world. Its an incredible opportunity to create the effort that helps us to see it. Breathtaking!

[Leigh]

Thank-you I value your comments highly

[gombeggar]

nice emote and scene staging

[Leigh]

Thank-you

[Marie]

Lovely...the rain in the field and the girl with goldn hair...

I wrote a poem called "Heart of Corn", which I have not yet posted.

[Leigh]

Look forward to that, let me know

[Corset]

What a beautiful write, the images of long golden hair like the corn silks is very powerful, laughing like children, it's just so lovely.

[Leigh]

Many thanks