SUMMIT

Life and death; joy or pain

Here I am crying in the rain.

Walking through the stepping stones,

Nobody hears all my moans.

I wish to disappear from all of these

Hoping to run in spite my weak-knees.

You and her, so canny and carefree

It hurts my heart, I just want to flee.

But my feet are still, they're nailed to the floor

I'm breaking apart, I don't want anymore

Escape from this nightmare, this painful sight

Before I break down and give in this night.

Reviews

[Wórdsmíth]

life n death , joy or pain ...wonderful lines, well written

[Seamstress]

wonderfully written and I do know the feeling well.