Written On a Mirror

Written: March 1st, 2007 Inspiration: Regina Spektor. Samson. for MY voice.

Words are just words – to you.  Doesn’t matter if they’re lies- or truth.  What you say is what you mean. Well- nothing is ever as it seems.  And you know me..

Well- I love a good story.

Love me now- or love me not.  Don’t make this- something it’s not.  But finally- it’s making snese.  Just remember- more is less.  Always- remind me-

more is less.

If words were words- and hearts were hearts.  I’m sure you still could- rip them apart.  Remember happy days before.  Because I won’t love you any-more.  No I can’t love you any-more.

My words were only words- to you.  Didn’t matter if they were lies- or truth.  What I said is what I meant.  Look at all the time we’ve spent.  You always aid you loved me..

Well- I love a good story.

 

Author's Note

Found this on a scrap piece of paper with various things on it. A Spansih speech, a couple drawings, and a Garden plot plan.

Reviews

[Aria]

The last two lines brought the whole piece full circle. Other than some misspelled words, which are not important, I really don't see anything technically wrong with this. But, then again, if I did, it wouldn't be free verse now would it? lol. Good work. I liked the depth you created in this.

[Laura E. Aranda]

This was cool but there were a couple of misspellings...maybe you know about them already.....cheers, lea

[Forist.johnston]

It was fun to read. Great poem! =]

[xRetroCortx]

'If words were words- and hearts were hearts. I'm sure you could- rip them apart'

I love that.

[Windy]

Good job here, I liked what it said and your flow and ryhme. "Words are just words" oh how true that is! BTW, I too "love a good story" ;)