Never fading

Sun sets in the west.

Tides flow in and out, but your

beauty never fades

Reviews

[Caradoc]

Very nice. There is eloquence in the simplicity of this poem. A simple description, a simple comparison, that contains great depth. I must confess I rather like this.

I've never been much into the reading or writing of Haiku, but this isn't bad. Maybe I'll stop by and read a few more of your works before the day is done. Have a good one.

-Caradoc

[Legolas]

Thank you very much.
I love writing Haiku. The challenge of trying to get the right amount of syllables while making a story is a challenge I like.

[Caradoc]

Perhaps one day I'll give it a try myself. The challenge does sound rewarding. I myself am rather fond of acrostic poetry, specifically the diagonal acrostic style Edgar Allen Poe uses in, "A Valentine".

[Legolas]

Yes. I haven't tried that form.

[Alm]

This must be one of my favorite haikus. And as some reviewers have said, it seems it can be read backwards as well. Timeless beauty isn't only aesthetic, that's what I get. :)

-Alm

[❀ Gabriela ..]

So simple and sweet! Amazing job! :)

[Laura Maidah]

I wish I knew your writing process. It's lovely btw. And here are a few extra words so I get a a point for this review. Lol.

[Legolas]

Thank you all!!

[....]

so simple and lovely

[Nath]

Very nice haiku! I like the way you compare change and invariance. I would think and say that your special someone has every reason to feel very special indeed.

[eglantine]

Nice soft haiku... traditionally they are meant to be read backwards as well as forwards.. takes an interesting spin that way

[Becky]

Aw, this is so sweet. Whoever this was written for is very lucky to know someone like you. :)