Sunset

Swan floats gently down

the tranquil, sparkling river.

Heads toward sunset

Reviews

[Isabelle Faye]

You seem to have a talent for haikus. This one is written so eloquently and smoothly, the words seem to be flowing as if they were the river itself. As I read it, a great feeling of peace came over me. In that second, in that poem, nothing else mattered but the swan. That is the mark of true poet, to turn what is fantasy, a poem, into reality. You have that gift.

[Legolas]

I do love them. Thank you very much. I am glad that the poem had that affect on you.

[Isabelle Faye]

It shows in your writing. Your welcome. So am I, I'm glad as well.

[Pax]

beautiful !
great work

[Legolas]

Thanks.

[Patricia B. Hepler]

Yes. Tranquil..towards sunset. Enjoyed muchly. ~pat

[Legolas]

Thanks.

[Alm]

I love how you can paint such a vivid picture with only 17 syllables. This little poems appears to calm me down :)

-Alm

[Nightingale]

Simple yet elegant, like the swan.

Nicely done.

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such a lovely read, enjoyed

[Becky]

This is peaceful and has beautiful imagery. Well written!

[❀ Gabriela ..]

Beautiful!! I absolutely love the imagery, wonderful job!

[Nath]

Beautiful description of a truly beautiful scene! Very well written!