The Kiss

The Kiss

A Poem by Legolas
"

What I imagine my first kiss will be like.

"
She leaned against me,
her cheek brushing mine.
She breathed she loved me,
as her lips were touching my ear.
Her arms around me,
a shield against the bad.
My arms around her,
protecting her from the hurt.
As she looks at me,
her eyes pierce my heart.
Her smile sets it free.
Her lips are close to mine. 
I relax as her breath warms my soul.
Then, her beautiful, perfect lips,
touch mine.
I never want this moment to end. 
When I'm here with her, 
nothing can touch me.
Nothing else matters.
She is everything.

© 2012 Legolas


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Abliet with few grammatic errors, but it's okay. It's very emotional and romantic, i like your flow of thoughts and the way you expressed your feelings to her. Yeah, i miss that feeling too. She would be very lucky girl to have you (:
Thanks for sharing..Keep it up buddy :D



Posted 12 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.




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Thank you very much:)

Posted 12 Years Ago


I'm not usualy a fan of romance, or anything soppy, but this is really a great piece of work. It sounds so safe, and comfortable. =)

Love it.

Posted 12 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.


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Added on June 23, 2012
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Tags: love, kiss, poetry, romance

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Legolas
Legolas

Rivendell, Middle Earth



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