The River Flows

The River Flows

A Poem by Legolas

Rain drips from the leaves

into the gurgling stream below

to drift to the sea

© 2012 Legolas


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Very nice description, and a long journey summed up in three lines without anything going amiss.
I particularly like that each line represents a "step" on the journey, and, at least I would think that the journey on the river is the longest, that part being represented by the line with the most syllables.
Great job!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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There's something about this that I really love, particularly the way you're able to paint this picture with so few words.

I really love this haiku; amazing job! :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Very nice description, and a long journey summed up in three lines without anything going amiss.
I particularly like that each line represents a "step" on the journey, and, at least I would think that the journey on the river is the longest, that part being represented by the line with the most syllables.
Great job!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on June 22, 2012
Last Updated on July 8, 2012
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Legolas
Legolas

Rivendell, Middle Earth



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I love writing haikus. I don't know if my poems are good. You can read them and see what you think. There is a short novel/story that is not finished. I'm not sure if I will upload the remaining .. more..

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