Love in Life

Love in Life

A Poem by Legolas

Rising sun goes up,

Sakura flowers rise to

their only life source

© 2012 Legolas


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You really like Sakuras, don't you? I love the image you described here. In my mind, I saw the flowers tilting themselves towards the sun's rays, it's protective warmth, and soaking it all in, rejoicing in first hint of sun in the day. Another amazing job, I love this one as well.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Legolas

12 Years Ago

Yes I do. Thank you very much.



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Well Ms. Isabelle beat me to it. Phooey. I loved it, and everything else she said. :)


Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Legolas

11 Years Ago

Haha, well thanks:) and I'm sure she would thank you too!
You really like Sakuras, don't you? I love the image you described here. In my mind, I saw the flowers tilting themselves towards the sun's rays, it's protective warmth, and soaking it all in, rejoicing in first hint of sun in the day. Another amazing job, I love this one as well.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Legolas

12 Years Ago

Yes I do. Thank you very much.
thanks:)

Posted 12 Years Ago


Well done. I particularly like the use of Japanese vocabluary - very nice metaphor at that!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on June 22, 2012
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Legolas
Legolas

Rivendell, Middle Earth



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