Love

Love

A Poem by Legolas

The Sakura tree

shades two flowers lying forever

by each other's sides

© 2012 Legolas


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This is such a sweet haiku. It made me smile and feel warm inside. It is obvious you care or you cared for the person that you wrote this about. I could almost see you placing the flowers there to rest forever together. Wonderful job, I love it.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Legolas

12 Years Ago

Thank you. Actually I didn't have anyone in mind. Just...a thought. I wrote this probably 3-4 months.. read more
Isabelle Faye

12 Years Ago

Oh, really? It is a very nice thought. Oh, that makes sense. You're welcome.
Legolas

12 Years Ago

Yes.
I agree!!! Thank you for this boost of confidence. You are very kind!

Posted 12 Years Ago


Your writing is all very poignant, but I liked this one especially. I like haiku because there's such a simple beauty to using so few words. Well done!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on June 22, 2012
Last Updated on July 8, 2012
Tags: poem, haiku, love

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Legolas
Legolas

Rivendell, Middle Earth



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I love writing haikus. I don't know if my poems are good. You can read them and see what you think. There is a short novel/story that is not finished. I'm not sure if I will upload the remaining .. more..

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