The Wind

Sakura tree shakes

against the eternal wind-

stops with gentle snow

Reviews

[Becky]

Words can't quite describe why I like this poem. It could just be taken so many different ways and means so much on a deeper level. I'm not sure if you meant it that way, but it's brilliant either way.

Gah. My brain is overwhelmed with the brilliance of it. So simple, yet perfect.

I do think this is your best poem. It's one of the best I've ever read, actually. Really, really, really nicely written. It's the right blend of emotions, and emphasis, and just... MRWEH.

Yeah, I'll stop babbling now, but excellent, excellent, glorious write! :)

[Legolas]

Wow. Thank you so much. I did mean for it to have a deep meaning. I'm glad you enjoyed it so much. An artist always is glad to have his work appreciated.

[Isabelle Faye]

I love this haiku. It paints such a beautiful, vivid image in my mind, every word adding layers to it, adding depth. I love how you described the event taking place, the elegant, flowing words you used. Good job!

[Legolas]

Thank you very much! Your reviews always mean a lot.

[Isabelle Faye]

I mean every one of them.

[Pax]

beautiful imagery. I like it.
sakura trees are always very beautiful to see.

[Legolas]

Thank you.