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You've got what looks like an interesting piece, but once you really get down to it, what exactly are you trying to say? It seems at points that you've chosen words simply because they're big and impressive, and in other places you've made up your own words. Spellcheck, work on your grammar, and consider breaking this up into paragraphs. As it is, it's somewhat of a strain to read because it's a machine-gun spray of thoughts coming right at the reader and it's somewhat difficult to discern what you're actually saying.
Posted 11 Years Ago
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11 Years Ago
The entire point is to take the misunderstood, and the ridiculous elaborate words in this case, and .. read moreThe entire point is to take the misunderstood, and the ridiculous elaborate words in this case, and to find your own meaning to what the somewhat large statement says. Read the quote at the top then reread. Knowing the deciphering eye, which means what you believe it to be; what you think it is or should be.
11 Years Ago
Also my friend, it takes a creative mind to surpass the superficial. Who's to say that grammar shoul.. read moreAlso my friend, it takes a creative mind to surpass the superficial. Who's to say that grammar should stay the same till our days are up. We are human we created the so called grammar with technological advances such as spell check as well.
You've got what looks like an interesting piece, but once you really get down to it, what exactly are you trying to say? It seems at points that you've chosen words simply because they're big and impressive, and in other places you've made up your own words. Spellcheck, work on your grammar, and consider breaking this up into paragraphs. As it is, it's somewhat of a strain to read because it's a machine-gun spray of thoughts coming right at the reader and it's somewhat difficult to discern what you're actually saying.
Posted 11 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
11 Years Ago
The entire point is to take the misunderstood, and the ridiculous elaborate words in this case, and .. read moreThe entire point is to take the misunderstood, and the ridiculous elaborate words in this case, and to find your own meaning to what the somewhat large statement says. Read the quote at the top then reread. Knowing the deciphering eye, which means what you believe it to be; what you think it is or should be.
11 Years Ago
Also my friend, it takes a creative mind to surpass the superficial. Who's to say that grammar shoul.. read moreAlso my friend, it takes a creative mind to surpass the superficial. Who's to say that grammar should stay the same till our days are up. We are human we created the so called grammar with technological advances such as spell check as well.