WOW! What a great riddle and poem. Now I know I'm wrong but I have an answer...I really do. I just can't put it here cuz it'll ruin the surprise!
You're writing is incredible as always. It's very thought provoking, I've read it quite a few times and each time something else jumps out at me and my thoughts go in another direction. Each time I think I have the answer or the truth I change my mind. What a great read!!
I'm such a huge fan of the way you write... If you published, I would definitely buy! :D
"It controls
It contorts"
Such a perfect arrangement of words.
I've been waiting patiently for something new from you and I am not disappointed. The muses are not silent just dazed. I like the flow of this and the last stanza rounds it out very nice. Thought-provoking, almost acidic in tone but nevertheless a wonderfully executed piece.
Truth is what we believe it to be- Most truisms are distorted, twisted and sprinkled with lies and most lies-the good ones are sprinkled with truth- Who holds the truth? -now that is the fifty dollar question-
wow.
well I am speechless, when you write something - then it is brilliance.
Why I am fascinated? It is simple, but such a strong message, so easy to read,
and such a depth. Your truth falls down like an angel of mercy from the sky,
braving the flames to save the reader he loves - but......he might not save her.
This is so, we need to live what we believe. A wonderful journey of such
a simple experience, what is truth? there are no absolutes! so there is no..
absolute truth. the truth is relative. yes. that's what I think. (favorite!)
I write about various topics. Mostly I write poetry/songs. I took my screen name from a concept album/epic poem I wrote years ago titled "Legion's Legacy: Tales of the Damned" which was inspired by .. more..