Period

Battling the silence of the muses. I have mustered this.

Period

 

 

 

Comma,

I have given pause to you

within this life

and have contemplated,

nay, Questioned this mark

I have made upon

this world that continues

its Exclamation, its point,

in which I find no comfort,

nor confirmation

and thus end,

not within this single moment,

but within nothing more

than this Period.

 

Legion

07NOV08

Reviews

[Dinesh Sairam]

I once thought there wasn't much to punctuations. But since the day I realized the little magic they can create, I've been always using them -- quite cautiously!

And this one, is just one refreshing read. Kind of, off-beat poetry; but not very poetic as your other pieces: Prose poetry? Maybe!

Keep writing.

[Jessica M.]

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just a breath.

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A commanding piece of writing to inspire the muses again. I like the way your writing flows. Sometimes you have to write about writing to get things restarted.

[Kevin Vorshak]

Well written punctuated by wry amusement. I enjoyed it.

[Wildfleour]

Cool! :)

[Wildecat]

So much said with so few words. Superb writing my friend.