A Man Divided

A Poem by Legion

Using math to describe a feeling within a haiku. Yea, I went there.

A Man Divided

A man divided

Exponentially fractioned,

Subtracting from life.

Legion

16SEP08

© 2008 Legion

Author's Note

Just something I've been feeling of late. This, too, shall pass.

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Cardinal Robin

Fascinating on the conundrum side O' things...as a chi kung guy I'm curious...In what way do you find divided and fractioned a subtractive? Enigmatic excellence! A most unique artistic blurb...as in "Is it even a puzzle?"
Perhaps as I read it Haiku style you mean that that is your chosen path in this passing time...to subtract, along with the previous lines... Hmmmm

Posted 16 Years Ago

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Rc R. Vagilidad

yeah. i agree to spoken. your chosen words fits in arithmetically and brilliantly. love haikus!

Posted 16 Years Ago

2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Spoken

lol, yes you went there.. and it's a sweet place to be. Word choices are essential in this type of poem, you've picked your words perfectly. Well done.

Posted 16 Years Ago

2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

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Added on September 16, 2008

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Legion

Nowhere near a BBQ pit!

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I write about various topics. Mostly I write poetry/songs. I took my screen name from a concept album/epic poem I wrote years ago titled "Legion's Legacy: Tales of the Damned" which was inspired by .. more..