Ready...Aim...Fire!

Ready...Aim...Fire!

A Poem by Legion
"

Don't won't to spoil it.

"

 

Ready...Aim...Fire!

 

Standing,

    cocked and ready

With practiced precision,

    he takes careful aim

At the target trained in his sight,

    and fires!

 

 

"Good boy! You went pee-pee in the potty."

 

Legion

11Sep08

© 2008 Legion


Author's Note

Legion
Ha! Something quirky for my grandson going through potty training. lol

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Reminds me of when I put little pieces of colored paper in the toilet, so my son had some extra fun with potty training! Cute!

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Cute...wasnt what I was expecting at all....

Potty training my son was an adventure through imagination...apparently...cheerios help with the aim. Go figure.

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

hahaha thats so sweet and hilarious... i loved it

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Cute, my daughter is having a problem getting my grandsons to aim straight I'm going to share this with her. ;)

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

that was delightful. L

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ha! Ha! Cute! I love it!

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Legion, looks like we were on the same page, nice write. Thanks for your comments and friendship.

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Aughhhh, if only it were that easy! LOL I'm not sure if "cocked and ready" were exactly appropriate for a 2 year olds vocabulary though, especially as he is repeating Everything he hears these days! LOL Maybe the old cheerio trick would work?? Clever, Fun write, thanks for the image and the laugh. Hugs

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

that was funny yet, good. i have to say it made me laugh and at the same time have to go to the restroom...lol

Posted 16 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

HAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Didn't see that one coming!!!
Great fun you clever grandad, aren't they precious???
Full marks...you made me smile :-)))) Big smiles!!!

Posted 16 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.


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